Hortatory Exposition
PLAYING GAME IS GOOD FOR CHILDREN’S DEVELOPMENT
Playing game in the right time is good for children's development. It can be an alternative to reduce their boredom when they too often doing formal activities. It’s useful to help them during their development times.
Firstly, game can balance the right brain and the left brain of the children. When they studying formally, sometimes their left brain works harder than the right brain. It quickly makes them feel bored and difficult to receive some lessons. If it’s so, they will prefer to play game. When playing game, children can have fun while learning. The interesting audio and visual are packaged in the game will attract their attention easily, so that their concentration increases. When children be usual to concentrate as good as possible with their game, it’s automatically make them concentrate too when doing another activity, includes studying formally. So, there are many lessons that they can receive. It means, they will become smarter.
Secondly, while children playing game, they can increase their foreign language skills. There are many games with a variety of languages. Anybody who want to play it has to know about the language that used there to understand the rule of the game. So, it automatically makes them learn the foreign languages happily.
Finally, playing game can influence the psychology of the children. During its development times, children need proper tools to form their personality. For the example, through game online, they can learn to interact with others. They also can learn to compete, try to get what they want, try to accept their defeat, and feel satisfy because of their victory. Children who like playing game will be more cheerful than the others who have never done it.
There are reasons why playing game is good for the children. It can balance their left brain and right brain. It means, both their brains will work optimally and they will be smarter. Playing game also makes them happy to learn foreign languages. It can increase their knowledge about the language. It’s also good to form their personality during their development times. So, children should be allowed to play game at the really right time. Parents should pay attention them and controlling their play game activity.
I believe that it's not good enough..
Please, give your comment, critics, and inputs!! :)
Mei, your topic is interesting. Also your content is complete. It already contains thesis, view, and the other.
BalasHapusYour grammar and sentence patterns are good. But, I think you must put 'for' before 'them' (in the last sentence of the last paragraph). So it will be => 'Parents should pay attention for them...' :D
That's all. I think your text is pretty good ^o^
And sorry if my comment looks like a critical, hehehe :p
Aaaaa thank you darling :)
BalasHapusAlhamdulillah.. sometime ago I were not so sure that the text's real hortatory! hehe
thanks a lot for your critics and inputs yaa ^_^b
Holla meimei, I have read your hortatory exposition text!
BalasHapusIt's good enough and you are good at choosing the topic!
I agree with Ambar, you should put 'for' before 'them'!
Maybe just this for today :)
I hope you also read my hortatory exposition text and please give your comment :)
hehe thanks for your comment, girl .. okay, I'll read your text too .. just wait for my comment ya ! :)
Hapus